Could someone who speaks English as their first language edit this short sentences please?

Hi to all,

I want to advertise my site with google search engine. I want to be certain that my texts are without any grammatical mistakes. Since I have limitation in number of my used letters, please don’t try to edit my sentences to improve them. Just tell if they are acceptable to use online for short advertisements or not.

Regards

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Chosen Answer:

2 small changes, in the first one it should be either “host” and in the third, “hostings” it should be plural

I’m tempted to change “best 3 affordable web hostings” to:
“3 most affordable web hostings” which doesn’t change your letter count at all. Yours is fine but I think that sounds slightly more natural.

The rest are grammatically correct, I can’t say I know what a web host is, but I’m sure if i did it would make perfect sense :)
by: GreenSheep
on: 4th February 11

13 Responses to “Could someone who speaks English as their first language edit this short sentences please?”

  1. BLUEJAY57 says:

    sounds good

  2. Alyssa Marie's mom says:

    They seem fine to me

  3. Sakila B says:

    I dont’ understand what i’m supposed to edit

  4. julanne l says:

    looks good to me

  5. Essam H says:

    …. If they make sense then yeah someone can edit it.

  6. Caroline Starr says:

    those are fine. probably make more sense to ppl who know what web hosts are. :) I would change the 3rd sentence to

    Best 3 afforbable web hosts

    if it isn’t too expensive i’d also add

    Best 3 most affordable web hosts

  7. OVER LORD says:

    Without any dought i would have to say thats the most brillaint short sentance ive ever herd and no i dnt see any mistakes or things id like to change its very awesome keep writing short sentances in this awesome mannor…

    p.s im an english teahcer.

  8. beachgirl says:

    1.Host
    2. OK
    3.Hostings
    4.OK

    Good Luck!!

  9. Jennifer S says:

    The first 2 are ok but the last 2 are awkward, maybe the number should be first? It doesn’t make sense to me

  10. fullofquestions says:

    Compare best web hosting reviews
    Choose a reliable, affordable host
    Best 3 affordable web hostings
    Best 3 web hosting reviews

    I hope this helps. You can check grammar on the word program that comes on mac computers. I think you can check it on PC too, but I am not sure

  11. GreenSheep says:

    2 small changes, in the first one it should be either “host” and in the third, “hostings” it should be plural

    I’m tempted to change “best 3 affordable web hostings” to:
    “3 most affordable web hostings” which doesn’t change your letter count at all. Yours is fine but I think that sounds slightly more natural.

    The rest are grammatically correct, I can’t say I know what a web host is, but I’m sure if i did it would make perfect sense :)

  12. mriley1996 says:

    As long as it is clear and to the point, then I think it will be alright to advertise as it is.

  13. Rebekah K says:

    The first sentence should say: “Compare the best web host reviews.” The second sentence is fine. The last two don’t make any sense as far as I can tell.

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